Great Poem about solider in heaven. It’s called “Final Inspection”

Jan 17, 2018 2:01 AM

DontKnowIm7

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*i don’t take credit for this poem. It was written by Sgt. Joshua Helterbran*

The soldier stood and faced his God,
Which must always come to pass;
He hoped his shoes were shining bright,
Just as brightly as his brass.

"Step forward now, soldier,
How shall I deal with you?
Have you turned the other cheek?
To my church have you been true?"

The soldier squared his shoulders and said,
"No, Lord, I guess I ain't;
Because those of us who carry guns,
Can't always be a saint.

I've had to work most Sundays,
And at times my talk was rough;
I've had to break your rules my Lord,
Because the world is awfully tough.

But, I never took a thing
That wasn't mine to keep;
Though I worked a lot of overtime,
When the bills got just too steep.

And I never passed a cry for help,
Though at times I shook with fear;
And sometimes ... God forgive me,
I've wept unmanly tears.

I know I don't deserve a place
Among the people here;
They never wanted me around,
Except to calm their fears.

If you've a place for me here, Lord,
It needn't be so grand;
I never expected or had too much,
But if you don't, I'll understand."

There was a silence all around the throne,
Where the saints often trod;
As the soldier waited quietly,
For the judgment of his God.

"Step forward now, soldier,
You've borne your burdens well;
Come walk peacefully on Heaven's streets,
You've done your time in HELL!"

poem

millitary

army

remberance

"It is our job as citizens to make sure the military never has to perform it's intended purpose" - unknown.

8 years ago | Likes 18 Dislikes 1

Solider.

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 2

Oh, gather 'round me, comrades and listen while I weep; Of a war, a war, a war, where hell is six feet deep.

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

War is war and hell is hell, and of the two war is worse.

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 1

You would not tell with such high zest To children ardent for some desperate glory, The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est Pro patria mori

8 years ago | Likes 10 Dislikes 0

That was beautiful. As a marine vet that definitely hit the mark. Thanks OP

8 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 0

I don't get soldiers, they are puppets of politician and i have to respect because they got the job they wanted?

8 years ago | Likes 6 Dislikes 6

My brother...blessing bro I miss the shit outta ya...

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

There was a douche on facebook saying why he doens't wear a poppy. Goes on about how violence is wrong and his status gave me polio. idiot

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Been watching The Last Post... "There was a soldier, a Scottish soldier.... " respect to all veterans.

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

I thought that was a sheep

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Before scrolling, did anyone else think that was Yoda?

8 years ago | Likes 26 Dislikes 7

YES.

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 1

Sadly.....yeah

8 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 0

Yep

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 1

Helps if you read the soldiers voice in a Cockney accent.

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

They gave their lives so rich people could play ego-trip

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 2

Cavalry soldiers have a better one; fiddlers green: Half way down the trail to hell in a shady meadow green,

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

are the Souls of all dead troopers camped near a good old-fashion canteen, and this eternal resting place is known as Fiddlers' Green.

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Marching past, straight through to Hell, the Infantry are seen, accompanied by the Engineers, Artillery and Marine,

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 0

for none but the shades of Cavalrymen dismount at Fiddlers' Green.

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 0

Though some go curving down the trail to seek a warmer scene, no trooper ever gets to Hell ere he's emptied his canteen

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 0

and so rides back to drink again with friends at Fiddlers' Green.

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 0

Hear the sound of a machinegun / Hear it echo in the night / Mortars firing rains the scene / Scars the fields that once were green

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Feels like rain

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Ass kissing for points can't even spell soldier right while mashing ctrl + v

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 1

Fuck the Brits. No one comes close to their level of savagery during the various wars they started. I will never celebrate these murderers.

4 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

No they didn't - WW1 was bullshit. It was a war between empires, not right and wrong. Any outcome would have let people live their lives

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 3

WWI was seriously fucked up

8 years ago | Likes 54 Dislikes 0

Fun fact, so few people fired their guns people had to hit them to force them to.

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

All wars are...

8 years ago | Likes 23 Dislikes 1

Worse than WW2, in its way.

8 years ago | Likes 15 Dislikes 0

WWII has people we can look at and go "this was a good side, this was a bad side". WWI didn't have that.

8 years ago | Likes 19 Dislikes 0

The christmas story where the two sides met and played together breaks my heart everytime

8 years ago | Likes 21 Dislikes 0

you know the higher ups intentionally made it so no other christmas truces could happen again right?

8 years ago | Likes 10 Dislikes 1

Let me go fucking kill them. WHERES THE TIME MACHINE! DOESNT MATTER ILL USE THE WARP!

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Not really relevant to his sentiment.

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

The sun shining down on these green fields of France. The warm wind blows gently and the red poppies dance.

8 years ago | Likes 125 Dislikes 1

Did the band play the Last Post and Chorus? Did the pipes play The Flowers of the Forest?

8 years ago | Likes 6 Dislikes 0

The trenches have long since vanished under the plow. No gas, no barbed wire, no guns firing now.

8 years ago | Likes 78 Dislikes 1

But here in this graveyard that's still No Man's Land, the countless white crosses in mute witness stand.

8 years ago | Likes 74 Dislikes 1

To Man's blind indifference to his fellow man, And a whole generation were butchered and damned.

8 years ago | Likes 72 Dislikes 0

.

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 3

Did they beat the drum slowly, did they play the fife lowly, did they sound the death march as they lowered you down

8 years ago | Likes 49 Dislikes 1

Did the band play the Last Post in chorus? Did the pipes play the Flowers of the Forest?

8 years ago | Likes 44 Dislikes 1

no, every single person that died in WWI died pointless, meaningless death that meant nothing, that's why we try to not repeat it

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 2

Another good poem for those who haven't read it, In Flanders Fields is very nice.

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

God better let them in - most of the killings been done in his name.

8 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 5

Firstly, that doesn't make any sense. I don't think you can place the burden of responsibility of an act on the person it was done for.

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Secondly, if zealots came to your town and destroyed everything, professing to make the place better - would you let them into your house?

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Either god is omnipotent and does nothing - or is not omnipotent at all - either way he/it is not deserving of our worship.

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 1

There would be no wars without soldiers. I'm just saying.

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 6

Without soldiers? Course! Then, instead of organized chaos, it would just be unorganized chaos.

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

Tell that to the millions conscripted for WW2. Lotta Russian soldiers didn't have a say in the matter.

8 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 0

I wonder if the enemy soldiers also went to heaven?

8 years ago | Likes 90 Dislikes 13

I'm actually curious if you murder in the defense of others are you allowed in heaven since it's a sin after all.

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 3

To quote the philosopher Hawkeye, "... except for some of the brass, almost everybody involved is an innocent bystander"

8 years ago | Likes 40 Dislikes 0

Depends on how he was. Did he simply fight the war or also kill innocents

8 years ago | Likes 7 Dislikes 2

"Simply fight the war" ...? Eh.

8 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Soldier fight wars politicians make them. The men and women in the boots are just following orders.

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

As a Veteran, I would love to have a beer with them again in this life or another. We may have even been friends.

8 years ago | Likes 101 Dislikes 1

Makes me think of the Christmas truce in WWI.

8 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 0

That's fuckin tragic and beautiful man

8 years ago | Likes 30 Dislikes 0

except terrorists, they deserve whatever pisshole they fall into

8 years ago | Likes 16 Dislikes 0

Asshole with with a gun doth not a soldier make

8 years ago | Likes 20 Dislikes 0

"One man's freedom fighter is another man's terrorist." the saying goes. But wrongdoing stays wrongdoing.

8 years ago | Likes 15 Dislikes 0

Thats not accurate though

8 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Of course not. This is a single phrase w/o much context. And the notion of "what is terrorism" has changed over time

8 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

personally id say a terrorist achives his freedom through violence on innocents, the other against military occupiers

8 years ago | Likes 6 Dislikes 0

Apply this model on the north Ireland conflict/ IRA or on the Basque/ Eta. Both did both. And keep in mind the indiv view of Mil. Occupiers

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