Grammar and Spelling Errors

repetition

should be "loathsome"

repetition

"past" should be "passed."

"past" should also be "passed."
Unless it's a stylistic thing like the use of "ought" as opposed to "ought to."

Proper is "mayhap." There is no mayhaps. However, it's archaic, and the lovely thing about that is that nobody will know it is wrong. Therefore it does not really matter.

See above.

Could be a synactic thing. I think Sandalwood said "so much as we can." Proper would be "as much as."

Note: now that I have seen the "so [blanks] as" format in other areas I'm leaning stylistic or syntactic choice.

See above.

Repetition.

Spelling error.

Repetition

Technically two words but this is honestly only the sort of thing a high school teacher or a perfectionist would care about. Including it anyway.

Repetition

Spelling error

Should be hyphenated. "well-being."

spelling error

spelling error

Probably indicative of intonation but perhaps not. Including to be on the safe side.

S P A C E

Technically not a word. But it does sound fancier, and maybe that's good for Sandalwood.

Should be "every day" in this context.

Repetition.

I forgot to highlight "reafs." I do not know if reafs are different than reefs, but maybe reafs is a misspelling of reefs.

Should be "gill" unless it shouldn't.

Should be "any effect"

I accidentally repeated a repetition and am too lazy to remove it.

Actually I tried to find a way to delete it and there is no way to delete single images. I remember when imgur would let you do that. Damn. Way to go, imgur. Or I'm a dummy.